Pages

Tuesday, 8 September 2015

Butter Butter

Screenshot 2015-09-08 at 09.27.13.png
Do know how to make butter by yourself?
So our literacy class made butter today with Mrs Garden and it was so fun making butter also we had to make it because so. How to make it and it was so delicious and it kind of like cream in it by itself. Do you what to make some.  

Do you know how make butter before?

So our literacy class made butter today with Mrs Garden and it was so fun making butter also we had to make it because so. How to make it and it was so delicious and it kind of like cream in it by itself. Do you what to make some.  

Do know how to make butter by yourself?
So our literacy class made butter today with Mrs Garden and it was so fun making butter also we had to make it because so. How to make it and it was so delicious and it kind of like cream in it by itself. Do you what to make some.Also how to make it is cream also a little bit of salt

WALT: write an introduction that orientates and hooks in the reader.

1 comment:

  1. Your introduction was a bit unclear, make sure you read it over to check that others can read it easily.

    ReplyDelete