Advice Column for Alex

Walt: Find the problem in the story and offer solutions to fix the problem
Have you seen a big spider in your room before?
So this girl could Alex had an big spider like seen it in your room before. So when the spider was in her room she was so much scared of it and if I had a spider in my room I went and call my mum to come and take it and back to Alex so Alex went to her she told her how to take it out with an jar and a paper. So Alex went and caught it with the jar on top and slide the paper under it.

River Talks

write a detailed introduction with hook and orientation.

have you went to Omaru creek to see what does the creek looks like before?

So yes I have so last week on thursday we room eight,room seven, room six went to Omaru creek to see and what is going to do. And we had to go there because they where telling us what dose it look like in the sea and this lady she told us if it is warm and then it was warm because there where lots of rubbish and it was dirty. Then what was in the  creek was rubbish and what does it look like in the creek is dirty and then I thought I would clean it up so it can’t be any dirty stuff and also wonderful. Than some other schools came to like college kids and one more school but I don’t know what it is and it was blue and yellow.

Honeymakers

WALT: Explain how beekeepers get honey
I have learn't  how does beekeepers how to get honey out of the honeycomb? the beekeepers take the frames of the hon eycomb out of the hive, and they can get the honey without hurting the bees. And the beekeepers needs to be careful. So he doesn't want to get stung from the bees and how to make them calm is how he pumps the smoke so it could go calm.

Honey Makers

Explain how bees make honey?

I have learn how does bees make honey in there honey comb and they  get nectar from the flower and they take it to they bee hive to make honey.How bees make's honey is waxing the nectar to make thicker so it can turn into honey.

Growing Pumpkins

Describe what happens to a pumpkin seed throughout each season?
I have learn how does pumpkins grow. In spring you have to put the seeds in. Then in summer the pumpkins grows into a yellow flower then bees come and pick some pollen. Then the day in autumn the yellow flower dies and there will be a bump and then the pumpkins will grow. Then on winter you cook some pumpkins.

My Summer Hoilday

In the summer holiday. There was a rugby game in eden park. And I went with my aunty Sita and my cousin Nela. And also we watched the warriors vs the sharks and Kata got cool as tries on the nrl game but the sharks won and the warriors lost then they came last and then the sharks came up to the finals with the South Sydney Rabbitohs.Then the  Rabbitohs mostly got the tires then the Sharks caught up to. Then the Rabbitohs and Sharks had a draw then the Rabbitohs got the last try. Then the Rabbitohs won the auckland nines.

My writing is about the Duffy Theatre

Yesterday afternoon there was a Duffy show in the hall. Some senior classes came to and some year 4 came to the hall. They were acting and it was so hilarious and so funny.

Tj was teaching Sienna how to reading books and she was thinking of tv shows she liked. Then the zombie Apocalypse came to Siena and Tj then he was frozen and scared because of the zombie Apocalypse.

The funniest part was when the The Garden Lady Fairy was singing and dancing and sang this and it is tinka tinka tinka tinka la la la,it was so funny show. Sienna went on a tour and took a travel to Harry potter there was a baby plant called a Mandrake and  it made lots of noise and it wasn't that loud.She read the story  Maui and the sun and Sienna helped Maui brother to slow down the sun. The one that was funny when Sienna turn Maui into scooby doo then Maui’s brother got angry at her and there were puppets. What I felt in the Duffy theatre was excited to watch it again because the  Garden fairy lady was so funny to me and all of.