This blog is a record of my learning from Pt England School in Auckland, through to Tamaki College.
Showing posts with label 2014. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 2014. Show all posts
Thursday, 4 December 2014
Monday, 1 December 2014
Kosini's writing about the pig
The farm was down a long, muddy truck, far away from the main highway. When I saw the farm there were tidy, packed, bales of hay that rested in a neat array. For nearly one hundred of years, the farm had been nestled on the side of the hill next to the babbling creek. I saw the water tanks which stood to attention like three rotund guards. When Tom was rolling around the hills, he got caught in the long shadows of the late afternoon sun. There was the old barn was home comforting, cosy and always busy with its inhabitants.
Kosini's writing about the pig
As the midday sun rose high over the farm, Tom the pig, settled into his eleventh mud-wallow. Life was good for Tom. As I saw Tom playing in the mud he had are rosy pink snout, that twitched as he sniffed. Tom’s tiny and small eyes thats was so shinny and were sharp also inquisitive. When Tom was at the farm he had patches of coarse hair stuck out from his face and tufts. When Tom was rolling in the mud he was being nosy by nature, wanting to know what was going on around him.
Thursday, 27 November 2014
Tuesday, 25 November 2014
Thursday, 13 November 2014
Kosini's Writing Skater
It was clear that the skater was oblivious to my presence.As I saw the skater was stern concentration causes the skater to frown. Eventually I reached the crest of the hill, and that is where I saw him first Having a heat haze covers the city in a steamy blanket, turning the hills to a pastel mauve then the skater shifts his weight, allowing for the board to rotate in mid-air. Then his body is silhouetted against the soft pink dusk sky. “Is that even possible?” I wondered, as I gazed in awe at the fearless skater.
Thursday, 6 November 2014
Kosini's writing about the old lady
As I watched the woman crouch down, I could see she was as ancient as the universe. And as I look at the old women and her keen eyes, shining and alight with mischievous youth deep channels of time, etched into her wizened surface. As I watched the old lady eta and I saw the old lady lips cracked furling around gums where teeth once stood.“How long have you been standing there?” I wondered as I caught the eye of the crumpled old lady
also rich indigo velvet, folded carefully to frame the face it was clear from her stare that she knew exactly what I had benney doing.
Thursday, 30 October 2014
Tuesday, 28 October 2014
Friday, 24 October 2014
Wednesday, 22 October 2014
Friday, 19 September 2014
Tuesday, 2 September 2014
Monday, 1 September 2014
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