Kia Ora Kosini. My name is Reagan and I am in Totara 3, Grey Main School.
I really like how you have presented this DLO. I also really like how you have added in some similes and a good use of descriptive language. Maybe next time you might want to check the spelling of some of your words. Other than that I really enjoyed visiting this post!! This post reminded me of when I went to Rarotonga and ate some tropical fruits like papaya, which is a bit similar to a mango.
Kia Ora Kosini. My name is Reagan and I am in Totara 3, Grey Main School.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you have presented this DLO. I also really like how you have added in some similes and a good use of descriptive language.
Maybe next time you might want to check the spelling of some of your words.
Other than that I really enjoyed visiting this post!!
This post reminded me of when I went to Rarotonga and ate some tropical fruits like papaya, which is a bit similar to a mango.
Noho ora mai
Reagan
Hey Kosini I really love this post! I love the way you described the well known mango. Keep it up.
ReplyDeleteKia ora I love Your blogpost. I really like how you explained the mangos.
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